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Burn This Away by =BeamTheFox:iconBeamTheFox:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Song


Verse 1:
I'm sick and tired
Of all these things that pull me down
My heart is weary
It won't be long before I drown
I know I'm failing
From you're word I've fallen short again
I have been poisoned
Soon I'll die from my own sin

Pre-chorus:
I will be born anew (x4)

Chorus:
Burn this away
(Take my life)
And free us from these chains
Burn this away
(Take my life)
And take away this pain
Burn this away
(Take my life)
And turn the night to day

Verse 2:
I'm sick and tired
Of all these things that pull me down
My heart is weary
It won't be long before I drown
I know I'm failing
From you're word I've fallen short again
I have been poisoned
Soon I'll die from my own sin

Pre-chorus:
I will be born anew (x4)

Chorus:
Burn this away
(Take my life)
And free us from these chains
Burn this away
(Take my life)
And take away this pain
Burn this away
(Take my life)
And turn the night to day

Bridge:

I remember when I was young
And oh so innocent
But now those days have passed
I'm all on my own

But there is hope
There is hope!


(guitar solo)


Chorus:
Burn this away
(Take my life)
And free us from these chains
Burn this away
(Take my life)
And take away this pain
Burn this away
(Take my life)
And turn the night to day

Burn it away!
©2009 =BeamTheFox
:iconbeamthefox:

Author's Comments

It's about time I posted the lyrics to my song. I've already written the bass line and my friend has written the guitar part, including the solo. I've already created a vocal layout for the song. All we need now is a drummer to do his part.

If you have any questions about the lyrics or the song, feel free to ask.

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:icondawnthepikachu:
~dawnthepikachu May 28, 2009, 4:51:12 PM
wow, that's really good!!!

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:iconbalacenia:
~Balacenia May 28, 2009, 4:53:06 PM
I like how clearly the emotion behind the lyrics shows. i'd like to hear the music and see how well the two fit together.
:iconbeamthefox:
=BeamTheFox May 28, 2009, 5:14:00 PM
Thank you! C:

--
~I'll stand, you'll see, me over all of your fallen!
I'll be, knee-deep, knee-deep in a sea of their organs!
So send me all of hell, and I'll face them!
I'll face them one on one-thousand!
:iconbeamthefox:
=BeamTheFox May 28, 2009, 5:17:03 PM
Thank you so much! I'm glad that the emotions behind the song were clearly seen C: Maybe I'll post the bass part of the song later this week :D

--
~I'll stand, you'll see, me over all of your fallen!
I'll be, knee-deep, knee-deep in a sea of their organs!
So send me all of hell, and I'll face them!
I'll face them one on one-thousand!
:icondawnthepikachu:
~dawnthepikachu May 28, 2009, 5:18:41 PM
your welcome!!

--
da quintuplets ~dawnthepikachu ~Inukage-Okami ~TeamAqua *Pikininja ~Ryujin-Chu

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:iconavirisluvadam:
~avirisluvadam May 28, 2009, 5:22:32 PM
I WANNA HEAR IT NNOW!!!!!!!! D:> upload it to youtube!!!! ... like a video!!! DO IT!!!!!!

--
You don't mess with a monkey with a knife unless you want it flying across the room!
:iconprincess-elincia:
=Princess-Elincia May 28, 2009, 7:27:34 PM
That's really well done, you must thought of this pretty hard xD

--
C'est La Vie~ ♥
:iconbeamthefox:
=BeamTheFox May 29, 2009, 2:34:31 PM
Lol, thank you C: :hug: The only challenge really was to make sure that the words fit with my music. The lyrics sort of just came to me... lol

--
~I'll stand, you'll see, me over all of your fallen!
I'll be, knee-deep, knee-deep in a sea of their organs!
So send me all of hell, and I'll face them!
I'll face them one on one-thousand!
:iconbeamthefox:
=BeamTheFox May 29, 2009, 2:34:57 PM
The bass line or me singing/screaming? lol

--
~I'll stand, you'll see, me over all of your fallen!
I'll be, knee-deep, knee-deep in a sea of their organs!
So send me all of hell, and I'll face them!
I'll face them one on one-thousand!
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